I wonder what makes people truly happy
I hear something is not true.
I see nothing from from from the future.
I want people to know who I am.
I pretend I don't know anybody
I see people are not real in the reality
I know that they don't know what it is
I cry
I understand some people can be true.
I say
I dream something I know it is Deja Vu
I try to be flexible trying to find my flexibility.
I know what my spirits wants Its there for me.
Hi my name is Tjay. I am 17 years old. I'm from Mongolia. I came to the United States about four years ago. I live in Oakland, CA. I go to OIHS. I've been going to this school for three years. I am junior this year. I cannot wait till I graduate from high school. I have a lot of interests in me. For example, I like to play basketball, go to gym and go hang out with my friends when I have free time. In the future I would like to go to college and get a degree in one major.
Tjay,
ReplyDeleteI have always heard what a smart and hardworking student you are, but I didn't know you are ALSO an amazing poet. Wow. You've written a really beautiful poem, and you did a great job helping other students write today too.
I am glad you are in this class, I think we will have a lot of fun.
Ms. Julie G.
Oh my friend you poem was nice!!! I also like the color of your blog!!! nice job Tjay!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem!
ReplyDelete- Ms. Katie
Tjay! That poem is deep! Your blog is so cool! I think you should keep it up even after the class ends and write about your life, maybe you can add beats to it?! :) Ms. Liza
ReplyDeleteI LIKE YOUR POEM AND YOUR BLOG. KEEP IT UP!
ReplyDeleteAwwwwwwwwwwwww
ReplyDeletei like the poem,its so cool
and also your blog looks cool with all different pictures.
Goodjob Tjay.(Mr.Looney Goon)lol
You life so cool man... I like..
ReplyDeleteI love your poem!
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem!!!!!!!1
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